it is the first day of spring and my kids are out of school and me Sandra and my mother jasmin are going to take my kids Dalia nick and Jorge out to some places to travel and it took us a day to get to were going to stay at and then a week passed and we came back and we were all so hungry and we had brought some pumpkin pie and we sat down on the table and started eating the food and the guy in the back was helping us bring our luggage to the house and he is hanging out or stuff and my kids are all very hungry espacially joerge he is very hungry and my other kid nick is just tired hes falling asleep my grandra is cutting the bread and me i am just feeding the horse and the poor dog fluffy is very hungry and very smelling he smells nasty he hasnt taken a bath in days.
As we paid the guy in the back his name was jonathan we paid him by giving him the pieces that my mother cut of the bread.As we wore all finish eating and talking I had to clean everything before my husband gets home if he does he works to much sometimes he comes home late at nigth or sometimes he dosent come home in 2 or 3 days and it bugs me because we can't a happy family with out him.as i smell the pumpking pie and the dog winning and the cat scratching the door to get out and the pigs are just oiking and oink.And i have to water my plants so they wont be dry all these things that i have to do everyday it just boreds me.
Monday, March 30, 2009
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HAHAHAA ARMANDO SMELLS LOL
ReplyDeleteU MISPELLED BATH YOU PUT BACK
LOL NICE STORY THO =]
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GOOD STORY JASMIN
ReplyDeleteI LIKEIT GOOD JOB
BUT YOU HAVE ALOT OF MIS SPELLED WORDS
you hav a couple of spelling corrections to fix otherwise than that it is a great story keep up the good work.... also nice creativity
ReplyDeleteTony!!!
ahh i love you used me in our story!!
ReplyDeleteyou have to fix some spelling errors and explain more your self in the sentences
**spid3rpigg
I loved your story its really nice but check your splling dont be lazy =]..
ReplyDelete*Dalia*
i like the story it was so interesting
ReplyDeletei like your story and am not a poor dog lol am a rich dog if anything lol but nice story it was good but you need to learn how to spell more
ReplyDeletegood story
ReplyDeletespelling errors senora fix that
dont be lazy stop eating honey combz too much sugar drains your mind of knowledge.
tsk tsk :(
nice one jasmin......^_^
ReplyDeletebut i agree with them
lots of spelling errors ^_^